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meridian_rose ([personal profile] meridian_rose) wrote2011-08-30 02:06 pm

How Fiction Works Writing Meme - Day Eight

8 - Do you use the passive voice or active voice? Both? Do you make a conscious decision to do it, or is it simply something that happens? When do you use passive voice versus active voice, and why? Example of passive voice: The ball was thrown by the boy. Example of active voice: The boy threw the ball.

I don't know. Sometimes Word insists I'm using the passive voice – but Word is often wrong about grammar, especially when it comes to creative works rather than formal letters. Sometimes the passive voice works – maybe the ball is the important object here; the ball lands in a clump of grass and lies hidden for years... until the protagonist finds it.

Some of these questions, more so than the previous meme, are harder for me to answer – if anyone who has read my work wants to differ on my interpretations, feel free. I might be doing things that I'm not aware of :D

ETA: I found an article that gives some examples of when passive voice is undesirable as well as some examples of where it can be useful.

I'll make an index post when I've completed the meme with links to all my answers; they will all be tagged #how fiction works meme. You can find the full set of questions at [livejournal.com profile] pristineungift's entry:here

[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-08-30 02:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Word always thinks the passive voice is wrong...I think it's currently not very fashionable.

This meme does look hard - I haven't made up my mind whether I'm ready to do it myself.

[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-08-30 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Sadly, the article says Strunk and White's The Elements of Style gets passive voice wrong; I don't think it's the first error I've found in that book, but I love it anyway.

Word annoys me frequently when correcting stuff I've put in deliberately.